Genius - Draft One
He was building and bundling things
In a cabin
Beside the stream
Through a broken window
I saw him
The stream threatened to overflow
The candle which lit his efforts
Appeared to be running out of wax
Winter coming
Things releasing a grip on life
Making something.
Machine? Sculpture?
It was not clear.
He worked for many hours
I was the spectator.
I saw
Water rising, a candle dying
Darkness climbing
Leaves falling
Straining to see inside
In the end , I thought that
The pitch black of night merged with the brilliance.
In a cabin
Beside the stream
Through a broken window
I saw him
The stream threatened to overflow
The candle which lit his efforts
Appeared to be running out of wax
Winter coming
Things releasing a grip on life
Making something.
Machine? Sculpture?
It was not clear.
He worked for many hours
I was the spectator.
I saw
Water rising, a candle dying
Darkness climbing
Leaves falling
Straining to see inside
In the end , I thought that
The pitch black of night merged with the brilliance.
1 Comments:
i really like this.
smells like the deep woods by a river
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